We have been learning to write a strong beginning. Here is mine.
One dark day my cousin arrived in Otematata “Mum! Lily's here.” I dashed out the door to greet her. There she was standing on the shingle road with her long brown hair. I could barely see her because of the bushes surrounding us. We all helped to unpack their bags. We walked inside. I showed Lily around.
"Hey Lewis, why don't you show Lily the back reserve?"
We trotted outside and opened the gate. A little puppy was standing in the middle of the reserve.
"Lily, there's a puppy, we should help it, ok? I will go and get it. You go and get my mum ok?”
A few minutes later my mum was there.